{"id":1544,"date":"2009-03-18T06:52:00","date_gmt":"2009-03-18T14:52:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/localhost\/rewriting-the-getting-started-text"},"modified":"2017-01-20T15:32:44","modified_gmt":"2017-01-20T23:32:44","slug":"rewriting-the-getting-started-text","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/needmoredesigns.com\/rewriting-the-getting-started-text\/","title":{"rendered":"Rewriting the Getting Started Text"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><strong>Before<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>There\u2019s nothing necessarily wrong with this text. It explains your options simply, as if they were three steps. But I think it seems a bit spread out and long-winded for that portion of the page. And I don\u2019t really like the appearance of three \u201cbullet points\u201d there quite as much as I once did.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Revised<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Now it reads a bit more like three paragraphs. Instead of three small headers, we have three paragraphs which feature those words in boldface. It\u2019s not perfect, but I\u2019m liking it better. Now it looks smaller on the page, but explains more. It doesn\u2019t just point you to a client survey, it now lets you know it\u2019s only going to take ten minutes out of your busy day. It also has a bit friendlier language, asserting that \u201cgood design is a team effort.\u201d I have been wanting to add that text before.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Finished<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>After a bit of discussion, we decided to change the first paragraph just a bit. We felt that perhaps the client survey wasn\u2019t standing out enough (it is a pretty important part), so we made it a bit bolder. We also didn\u2019t feel that the bold words in general were strong enough, and I was getting tired of the \u201cHello!\u201d opening sentence.<\/p>\n<p>We think that what we ended up with was a definite improvement.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>There\u2019s nothing necessarily wrong with this text&#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":13562,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_acf_changed":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"acf":[],"jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_featured_media_url":"https:\/\/needmoredesigns.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/03\/DeathtoStock_Medium6.jpg","_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/needmoredesigns.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1544"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/needmoredesigns.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/needmoredesigns.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/needmoredesigns.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/needmoredesigns.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1544"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/needmoredesigns.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1544\/revisions"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/needmoredesigns.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/13562"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/needmoredesigns.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1544"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/needmoredesigns.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1544"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/needmoredesigns.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1544"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}